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 The Crow.


Spreads its long black wings
Ready for flight

Up into the air
As high as he can reach

Rocks and arrows
Try to block and kill him

The crow
Keeps trying to move forward

The rocks make him weaker
The arrows make him frighten

The crow doesn’t give up
Not yet

Soon the rocks and arrows
Falter his hope

The crow
Starts to give up

His pace slows down
And doesn’t try to doge

He lands on the ground
Cold and lonely

But do they stop?
No.

One arrow soar through the sky
And the crow is dead

He was beaten
Both physically and mentally

But when he surrendered
They still didn’t stop

Now
The crow is dead

Left in this world
To rot.
©2008-2009 ~LiveBleedDie
:iconlivebleeddie:

Author's Comments

The Crow.
This can be viewed two different ways.

One would be racism, and making fun of other becuase they're different. The Crow is often a bird hated much by others. I see no wrong with this bird, but many hate them. Therefore The Crow came to mind.

The second I'll let you figure out.

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:iconlishazombieh:
sounds like my life! hahaha jk jk jk jk

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:iconshinydragonfly:
awesome :D

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-I will haunt you with Dark Beauty-
~In the grey shadows I lurk~
*Into your dreams I will slither*
:icondeathlock78091:
actually kinda does sound like my life...>_<
still this was really good!

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:iconlivebleeddie:
:hug:
thank u.

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"Some people live their lives while others just survive, I chose to live my life so I struggle and strive, Walk another mile and I stile simle" -Jester, Short Stories, Live My Life.
:iconendlesspain777:
that was really good.......i love it.............it makes me sad, yet makes me understand a bit more......about people......cuz i mean if someone is getting picked on lets say for instance.......Naruto.......they wont stop untill he is dead.......im not saying he will die or he will give up............im saying that people are just that evil........just cuz someone is diferent.........doesnt give anyone the right to think they are better................. you know what im saying?

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You Tell Me You Love Me,
But I Know It's Just A Lie,
Because Everytime I Hear It,
It Makes Me Wanna Cry.
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"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not ok. It's not the end."
:iconlivebleeddie:
thanks im really glad u liked it and understand it! :hug: :heart: that means alot.

and yeah i under what ur saying. :D

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"Some people live their lives while others just survive, I chose to live my life so I struggle and strive, Walk another mile and I stile simle" -Jester, Short Stories, Live My Life.
:iconendlesspain777:
=] good im glad....

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You Tell Me You Love Me,
But I Know It's Just A Lie,
Because Everytime I Hear It,
It Makes Me Wanna Cry.
--
"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not ok. It's not the end."
:iconlivebleeddie:
:D :hug:

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"Some people live their lives while others just survive, I chose to live my life so I struggle and strive, Walk another mile and I stile simle" -Jester, Short Stories, Live My Life.
:iconendlesspain777:
hehe...i was kinda inspired by that.....i dont know how but it really made me understand....if that makes sence.....

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You Tell Me You Love Me,
But I Know It's Just A Lie,
Because Everytime I Hear It,
It Makes Me Wanna Cry.
--
"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not ok. It's not the end."

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